This is a very interesting adaptation of the original story rather than a screenplay version on it. So you have moved off the task but there's a lot of merit in your writing and your development of the narrative. Some spelling errors including mis-spelling diegetic - you missed out the first 'e'.
This is a very interesting adaptation of the original story rather than a screenplay version on it. So you have moved off the task but there's a lot of merit in your writing and your development of the narrative. Some spelling errors including mis-spelling diegetic - you missed out the first 'e'.
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